Umm, yah, I tried to do a manga style, which is usually not colored, and I think both are rather too much. Ah well, this is how we learn. Thank you very much.
Well, I wouldn't say "cute" but this is eerily enticing.
Draco watched the heart slowly cease beating within his hand, licking the warm, sticky blood from his fingers as the clock ticked in the corner. He'd removed his robes and shirt because he was fastidious, but the blue jeans, those he'd stolen from the first victim and it was fitting that he wore them to every death since.
His lover would be chagrined at the drops on the new carpeting, but Malfoy knew how much a young, tender offering would go to sooth his anger. He grinned, sucking lightly at his pinkie, tongue darting out to clean the blood from beneath his nail. The heart gave its final pulse and rested silent in his hand. He squeezed it, releasing the last dredges of life-sustaining blood. His laugh as the thickened fluid oozed out in the shape of Snape's nose was chilling, as befitted a Vampyr of such a distinguished lineage.
Ooooo, heh heh heh, i love it! XD the jeans, are an especially good detail. i didnt even think of why he is dressed like this, just wanted him topless. :D and really good, creepy discription of the blood. Mmmmm... thanks you so much.
Thanks, his look is definetly based off anime, or manga. he looks rather like a little boy caught with his hand in the cookie jar, to me. (or maby that should be 'whith a fresh kill')...
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Date: 2008-07-21 02:10 am (UTC)Draco watched the heart slowly cease beating within his hand, licking the warm, sticky blood from his fingers as the clock ticked in the corner. He'd removed his robes and shirt because he was fastidious, but the blue jeans, those he'd stolen from the first victim and it was fitting that he wore them to every death since.
His lover would be chagrined at the drops on the new carpeting, but Malfoy knew how much a young, tender offering would go to sooth his anger. He grinned, sucking lightly at his pinkie, tongue darting out to clean the blood from beneath his nail. The heart gave its final pulse and rested silent in his hand. He squeezed it, releasing the last dredges of life-sustaining blood. His laugh as the thickened fluid oozed out in the shape of Snape's nose was chilling, as befitted a Vampyr of such a distinguished lineage.
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Date: 2008-07-22 05:07 am (UTC)the jeans, are an especially good detail. i didnt even think of why he is dressed like this, just wanted him topless. :D and really good, creepy discription of the blood. Mmmmm...
thanks you so much.
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